Lukka Chuppi

 I wake up in the morning and the only thing I want to do is to listen to "Luka chuppi" one more time. Only a few days back I realized how beautifully the song was written. Nobody writes like that these days, do they? The more I think about the song, the more beautiful it becomes. It is a conversation between a mother and her son. Her son passed away and she is calling him back home while the son is describing the place where he is in. She is calling her lamp back. The song describes the son's view of the place where he is (heaven). He is in such a place where he can simply jump and attain his dreams. He can be free and fly as high as he can. The way Javed Akhtar has written the song is just...(leaves me speechless) A.R.Rahman and Lata Mangeshkhar have definitely don justice to the song. I love the part when she says 'bahut' with full frustration of a mother.

The song goes like this:

Lukka chuppi bahut hui saamne aaja nah
Enough of hide & seek, come home
Kahan kahan dhoonda tuje thak gayi hai abh teri maa
I searched for you everywhere, I'm tired now
Aaja saanj hui mujhe teri phiker
It's evening now, I'm worried about you
Dhoondhula gayi dekh meri nazar aaja nah
My sight has become hazy, come home

Kya bataoon maa kahan hoon main
I don't know how to describe the place I am at.
Yahan udune ko mere khula aasman hai
There is an open sky here to fly
Tere kisson jaise bhola salona jahan hai yahan sapnonwala
The place is as beautiful and innocent as you described in your stories
Meri patang ho befikar udd rahi hai maa
My kite is flying without any fear
Dor koi loote nahin beech se kaate na
No one will cut my kite's string


Teri raah thakey akhiyaan jaane kaisa kaisa hoye jiyaa
My eyes are waiting for your arrival, my mind is goin through various emotions
Dheere dheere aangon uthre andhera mera deep kahan
The street is becoming dark slowly, where is my lamp
Dalkhe suraj kare ishaara chandha tu hau kahan
The sun is setting and gesturing the moon, where are you?
Mere chandha tu hai kahan
Where are you my moon?

Kaise tujhkho dhikaoon yahan hai kya
How an I show you what is here?
Maine jharne se paani maa todke piyaa hai
I drank water from the fountain
Guchcha guchcha kai khwabhon uchalke chuan hai
I have touched my dreams with a jump
Chaaya liye bhali dhoop yahan
Sunlight also has shelter here
Nayaa nayaa sa hai roop yahan
Everything has a new outlook her
Yahan sabh kuch hai maa phir bhi lagey bin ere mujhko akhela
Everything is there here, yet I feel lonely without


          I don't know if the meaning I have given brings the full beauty of the lyrics, but those who can understand Hindi and poetry will know what I'm talking about. No one writes songs like these now a days and no one has the time to appreciate poetry. I made my neighbour listen to it and she went "What's so good about this song? Nothing enjoyable about it!" In a time of "Sheila ki Jawani" and "Why this Kolaveri" (not that I don't enjoy them at all) there is hardly any soul to appreciate good poetry. Hope this doesn't end up in the disappearance of it.

-Shreeji

Flash Fiction 1

She always wanted to go to that restaurant but never got the chance to. He promised her he would take her one day. And there they were on that beautiful evening. The musicians played the most beautiful music. The lighting was just perfect, not too bright not too dim. She looked at the couple sitting near by. She could sense the love they had for each other. She remembered the day, he first asked her out. The joy in her put everything to a stand still. She could think about him and only him. She saw him sitting opposite to her, but something was wrong. She asked, "What's wrong darling?" He told her something that she never expected. The music grew loud almost deafening her. The lights were too blinding. She wanted nothing but to get out of that place.

-Shreeji